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GeezerVison is showing github.com — Shadow DOM slots, composition by MaxSierra16 · Pull Request #561 · javascript-tutorial/es.javascript.info Conversation
joaquinelio
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Please make the requested changes. After it, add a comment "/done". |
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Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
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@joaquinelio Gracias por tus observaciones. De verdad fueron muy acertadas. Hoy mismo estare pushiando los cambios 🚀 |
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Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: joaquinelio <[email protected]>
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/done |
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Lo lei y me parecio muy bien,
pero 2 sugerencias que no incorporaste y me parece que deben resolverse
447 .... "los métodos: " o "estos métodos : "
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451, pienso tmbién cómo es más facil leer
evito el potencial y el reflexivo "nos gustaría"
"Si queremos saber, podemos..."
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"Si quisiéramos saber, podríamos "
Si no contestás lo agrego como está,
preferible online aunque tuviera errores
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Cool 🚀 |
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/done |
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no puedo verlo bien ahora
estaba bueno antes ,estara mejor ahora, cheqealo online,
problemas, nuevo pr y cuandopueda vuelvo
salud
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Thank you 💖 I updated the Progress Issue #17 🎉 🎉 🎉 |
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