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@oshliaer oshliaer commented Aug 12, 2019 •
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  • Склонения
  • Упразднение частого использования местоимений
  • Упразднение частого использования предлогов/наречий
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Вычитка 7-animation 1-bezier
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По мне всё хорошо, но вот это смущает:

дать очень быстрый результат «отсутствие пересечения»

Может тире тогда поставить?
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Может тогда отойти от контекста и добавить следующую мысль: "Таким образом, проверка пересечения выпуклых оболочек в первую очередь может дать быстрый ответ на вопрос о наличии пересечения." ?
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По-моему, это вообще идеально!
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Merge branch 'master' into patch-proofreading-animation-bezier
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